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Song (a villanelle I hope)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-21-99 12:57 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Tonight I find my heart is filled with song.
Melodies of life descend on my ears.
The rhythms of the night are clear and strong.

My passion for music has been lifelong.
It has been my escape throughout the years.
Tonight I find my heart is filled with song.

Though tone deaf, still to music I belong.
Crickets and frogs will move me to tears.
The rhythms of the night are clear and strong.

Moonlit walks soothe me when something is wrong.
Embracing the song still quiets my fears.
Tonight I find my heart is filled with song.

Walk tonight and bring your lover along.
Gaze in their eyes when the music appears.
The rhythms of the night are clear and strong.

Hold your lover and kiss them deep and long.
Keep that feeling alive throughout the years.
Tonight I find my heart is filled with song.
The rhythms of the night are clear and strong.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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Rita
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1 posted 08-21-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

very beautiful, but hey, coundnt expect anything less

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"And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom"
Nicole
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2 posted 08-21-99 01:28 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Such a happy and tender poem. The music of the night soothes, and gives light to the darkness. Well done DE!

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*

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~one voice~
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3 posted 08-21-99 05:47 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Very well done indeed! Ever heard "The Music of the Night" from the Phantom of the Opera? That is what this poem reminded me of. I like...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Dragoness
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4 posted 08-21-99 10:39 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

WOW! I loved it!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Skyfyre
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5 posted 08-21-99 11:00 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

These lines were impressive ... the music that the poem describes was well represented by the rhythm ... well done.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Gentle Soul
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6 posted 08-21-99 12:40 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

wow brother!!! this is beautiful. Maketh me smile.. LOL... this is a good one love!

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Sue
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7 posted 08-21-99 04:47 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Well done!
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