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Sundance
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0 posted 08-20-99 09:07 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

I look at your picture,
I look at your face,
something now stands in it's place.

I remember the times,
you were happy and gay,
It seems all dull,
now that you are away.

It stragles me to think,
that I never got to say,
how much I love you,
in my own special way.

You were a person,
loved by all,
everyone tall and small.

I remember how we played,
in the garret all afternoon.
The way you talked the day away,
I'm going to have ta end this soon.

It hurts me to think,
that I never got a chance,
to say I love you,
this isn't just romance.

I love you!
Love you!


[This message has been edited by Sundance (edited 08-20-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Sundance - All Rights Reserved
pusskatt
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 08-20-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for pusskatt   Email pusskatt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pusskatt

very nice!
Emmy
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2 posted 08-20-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

One of your best. The change at the end really helped too. Smiles!
Sundance
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3 posted 08-22-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks!


Sundance
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4 posted 08-24-99 08:54 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Anyone else?


Seeking77
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5 posted 08-25-99 03:51 AM       View Profile for Seeking77   Email Seeking77   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeking77

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sundance
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6 posted 08-27-99 01:00 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks
 
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