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Lars

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la hac' awwni
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Euless, Tx, 76039


0 posted 08-20-99 08:16 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

You are the Lightening
that sparked
me beyond
what I
was capable.

I want, let me, to be the Thunder
in your veins
coursing to every cell,
echoing
off every emotion;
exploding in white hot heat
in your mind
and behind your eyes.
Rushing into your heart,
imploding your heart's door.
To let your pent up emotions
run its course;
like a wild raging
river of sound.
Cleansing
everything in its course,
leaving Love that knows no limits to build anew.

A new Love that you seek, will unite a bond that cannot be torn asunder!
As the Stars in the Night sky and the Seasons
change,
Our Love
is as Lightening
booming
through our bodies
electrified;
burned into one,
bonded together. Never changing.

Strike me
shake me
over and over.
I am the lightening rod of your
extreme Love.
Let me be burned
by Your Love
that is Always
there;
wrapped in your arms
pulled into
a swirling cauldron
of total abandonment. Wantonness.
Never to finish
Never to stop
Never ending
Never consummated.
STRIKE ME
IF YOU DARE
AGAIN.
AGAIN.
I
AM STRONG!


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Severn
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1 posted 08-21-99 08:01 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is pretty passionate stuff! Nice contrasting images too.
la hac' awwni
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2 posted 08-21-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Yes, she does this quite easily with me.

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 08-22-99 09:01 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

whew...this is a powerful piece. I really enjoyed it, thanks for posting

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-22-99 09:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

La,
You know that some that get struck by lighting never recover?
Well done.
la hac' awwni
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5 posted 08-22-99 06:44 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same!

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la hac' awwni
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6 posted 08-22-99 06:45 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same!

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la hac' awwni
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7 posted 08-22-99 06:47 PM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same!

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8 posted 08-22-99 06:58 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

No wonder you were struck! Lars sounds like quite a guy.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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