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Lars |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
You are the Lightening that sparked me beyond what I was capable. I want, let me, to be the Thunder in your veins coursing to every cell, echoing off every emotion; exploding in white hot heat in your mind and behind your eyes. Rushing into your heart, imploding your heart's door. To let your pent up emotions run its course; like a wild raging river of sound. Cleansing everything in its course, leaving Love that knows no limits to build anew. A new Love that you seek, will unite a bond that cannot be torn asunder! As the Stars in the Night sky and the Seasons change, Our Love is as Lightening booming through our bodies electrified; burned into one, bonded together. Never changing. Strike me shake me over and over. I am the lightening rod of your extreme Love. Let me be burned by Your Love that is Always there; wrapped in your arms pulled into a swirling cauldron of total abandonment. Wantonness. Never to finish Never to stop Never ending Never consummated. STRIKE ME IF YOU DARE AGAIN. AGAIN. I AM STRONG! ------------------ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is pretty passionate stuff! Nice contrasting images too. |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Yes, she does this quite easily with me. ------------------ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
whew...this is a powerful piece. I really enjoyed it, thanks for posting ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
La, You know that some that get struck by lighting never recover? Well done. |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same! ------------------ |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same! ------------------ |
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la hac' awwni Junior Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 44Euless, Tx, 76039 |
Seymour Tabin: In March '97 I was struck by "Lars" and haven't been the same! ------------------ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
No wonder you were struck! Lars sounds like quite a guy.  ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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