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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
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0 posted 08-20-99 05:47 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

its beating on my mind again,
where is the hollow friend,
i want that craving,
makes me feel small,
thrown around someones rag doll,
but im in heaven,
hell's release,
no more chains,no more leash,
i can breathe,and im alive,
nothing kicking me inside,
the power of love,
has found me dead



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Starith
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1 posted 08-22-99 01:16 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Wow an amazing poem...can't believe you've gotten no responces other than this one...

Keep up the good work!
 
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