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Waiting, I知 Waiting

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 08-20-99 05:41 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Waiting, I知 Waiting

Waiting, I知 waiting, I want to see
the reflection in my lover痴 eyes of me.
I want to hear his voice within my ear,
I want to feel him hold me near.

I don稚 want much, just the very all of him.
I want to take his heart, hold it in my hands,
and above all I want him to understand
that I am his, forever, I値l be at his command.

Yes, I know this is not feminism at its very best
but I love it when he holds me to his chest,
I love it when against him I can rest,
I love being all of his, it痴 the very best.

OK, so I知 repeating myself, and you find it ridiculous
to hear from a woman who thinks of two as 填s
and as a romantic, I still take my clue
from memories of my parents, lovers true.

They had the secret, I know for a fact
loving was something they didn稚 lack.
The days give me plenty of work and flack
in the nighttime, it痴 my husband I want to attack!

Not with words or rolling pins or threats or growls
but to him I want to pretend to be on the prowl,
to be a kitten, a cat, a feline sublime
and I want him to get me purring somehow.

He has his ways, I値l not share them here,
you致e got your ways, you致e nothing to fear.
Waiting, I知 waiting, I want to see
the reflection in my lover痴 eyes of me.

20 August, 1999
ゥKRJ



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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 08-20-99 06:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Your getting very adapt at writing about the things about you.
And you do it so well. another good one
I'm becomming a real fan.
Sunshine
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2 posted 08-21-99 07:18 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Seymour, to paraphrase, "hopefully you ain't seen nothing yet!"
Severn
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3 posted 08-21-99 08:28 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I know the feeling! The comfort of curling up with the man you love, nestling your head under his chin, feeling those secure wonderful arms - and knowing that you're giving him comfort too - better than a hot bath (even sex!) any day. Love your poem.
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-21-99 08:57 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Sunshine... great sentiments, pussy cat/Tiger. Some of your stanzas differed from others in their meter, and you seemed to slip in places. Overall, the message came through loud and clear - you've got a lucky hubby.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 08-21-99 11:37 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Here's a secret about me that i'm gonna share with every darn person that read's this....I have always been the "independant" woman who needs no one and nothing - but you know what I value most of all? When I have a man who is "stronger" than me....and to have him take me in his arms, I feel safe like a child.....and it's that moment that I let him be the strong one...and I am free to be weak and helpless, safe against him....Even the strongest of women eventually resort back to the strength within the arms of a man......it's instinct from our caveman days, and yet it still drives us today ! ( I still like to be drug around by my hair too - is that taking it too far? Do I need counseling??!!) he he he Me Jane !

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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6 posted 08-21-99 11:40 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I better comment on the poem now, 'eh? Sunshine, it sounds like you've found your Tarzan!....You've got it bad, and it shows!! Beautiful poem of love, desire, & devotion!! Bravito!!!! And look at all you provoked me to say! I just can't shut up!! :O blah blah blah.....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Sue
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7 posted 08-21-99 05:09 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

You make me very envious!
aziza
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8 posted 06-20-2007 02:09 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

This is wonderful.

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