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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 08-20-99 04:21 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Rain On

Itís raining out
come and stay
inside with me
we can play.

Itís raining out
donít leave now,
I will miss you ~
you take your bow.

Itís raining out
you always clown,
running to the car,
pretending to drown.

Itís raining out
Godís aícrying,
youíre not here,
Iím aísighing.

Itís raining out
you had to leave.
I heard you turned,
crashed and burned.

Itís raining out
streets were slick
your tires skidded
you passed quick.

Itís raining out.
My tears rain.
Youíll never
come back again.

20 August, 1999
©KRJ



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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-20-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

WOW!!! This one's sadness snuck up on me... great job!
hoot_owl_rn
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very sad
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-20-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Sad is not bad.
Enjoyed the read.
elvira
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4 posted 08-21-99 02:56 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

well done, Sunshine


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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...your countenance...eight short weeks...My One and Only...hoarse whispers...
What will it be?...break my heart...hour after hour...serving wench...take a guess...sink or swim...stolen hours...the mistress...
companion...Perfection...a little girl...Mr. Jones...life is like...insomnia...devotion...too soon...07-20-69...craving...change...
Master...apart...pride...plain...hush...then...D/s...shameless self-promotion

[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-21-99).]
pen of passion
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Sunshine, Well done.
Sue
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6 posted 08-21-99 05:13 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Simply tragic.
Kelly
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7 posted 08-22-99 01:25 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Very touching. I loved it. Thanks.
traveler
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8 posted 08-27-99 09:59 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Very moving Sunshine. Quite a turn. Smiled through the first stanzas, as it reminded me of "playing" ... then the shift to the loss ... very effective ... never take a day for granted .. thank you for your prose.

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Thank you ALL so much. Again, this is another one that just "snuck up on me" as well. Your comments keep my Muse up at night! Thanks for reading.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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