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Sidhe-inspired At a challenge from Lady deVine.

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-20-99 02:12 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Faerie enchantment dances from your eyes.
It has enraptured and captured my heart.
Like the newborn sun our passion does rise.
Your bewitching spell was only the start.

You cast your charms with ease born of the Sidhe.
Masculine sorcery casts it's own spell.
With tender regard I drew you to me.
Before you knew it you loved me as well.

Magical love has come to full flower.
Each breath we share serves to deepen that love.
Eyes wide we bask in each others power.
With tears of joy we thank the Gods above.

I enfold you in my arms tenderly.
Soon I know that holding you, I find me.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-20-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I was told that sidhe was pronounced "shee."
Gentle Soul
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2 posted 08-20-99 02:26 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

That was beautiful.. I like this one brother

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Nicole
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3 posted 08-20-99 02:33 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Love has so many facets, I believe you portrayed the tender, joyful aspect very well. I enjoyed this muchly, I did.

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*
Sunshine
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4 posted 08-20-99 02:40 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Dimply Tanfastic!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Majere
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5 posted 08-20-99 02:59 PM       View Profile for Majere   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majere

I liked this one. I've read a lot of your work here in the Open Poetry forum (I read the ones with the most responses first and comment on those that I find to be good) and as of yet have found little reason to comment on most of your stuff. But this poem was very good and I thought I should let you know.

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Such is the way to immortality ;)

DreamEvil
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6 posted 08-20-99 03:03 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Majere? As in Raistlin and Caramon of Dragon Lance fame, or Kitiara?

Thank you for the reply.
WhtDove
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7 posted 08-20-99 05:39 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What a wonderful piece Dream! It's warm and tender! Great Job!
Poet deVine
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8 posted 08-20-99 07:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok sweetie, you win. You wrote something gentle and sweet! It truly flowed like silk through my hands. Loved it!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 08-20-99 07:28 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dream,
You did a wonderful job on this piece. Congrats!!! Thanks for posting it

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Skyfyre
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10 posted 08-20-99 09:20 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Delightful. I wonder if you would mind if I sent this one to my love (with full credit given, of course).

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Rita
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11 posted 08-21-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

beautiful. shows how much emotion love fills us with.

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"And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom"
~one voice~
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12 posted 08-22-99 03:13 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I absolutely love this piece! I don't even know what to say.... you know it's good when you've got me speechless!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Dragoness
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13 posted 08-22-99 03:56 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Soft and flowing,very beautiful! I loved it

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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