Sunshine, You caught the weakest line in the poem I wanted to say each statement finshed with the sting of a bee. Keeping it in the rhyme form I was using was difficult. I'll do better next time, thanks for the read. i enjoy your comments and your great poetry.
Fabulous piece my dear, and you are talking to the queen of "can whacking..." with my towel of course !! ~~ A whack every day, keeps the boredom away.....~~ Have you had your can whackin' today...???~~~ (singing * * *) Obviously this touched me deeply.......(grin)
------------------ - poet FemmeFatale
"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet