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angela yong
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Heaven is just a touch,an exasperating pursue filled with joyous torment.I wish to see the fruits of glory and grace, yet that blinding light forbids me thus.Reasoning with the truth--the taste of sweet happiness is only found within.However I beg for the Release, it seems a eternal apart,the massive trials blocking this passage.The waiting is etheral, the wishing is foolishly empty.If you happen to enter those golden gates first, please wait for me.Nothing I desire more than being up there with you. Everything is just plain illusions ,filled with isolating solitude and persistent impatience.Yet, I continue this struggling path to seek out my paradise, our resting place.Amazing Grace, how sweet it is!
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Welcome to the forums, angela
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Have you thought of changing the format on this one, to perhaps something like this?

Heaven is just a touch,
an exasperating pursue
filled with joyous torment.
I wish to see
the fruits of glory and grace,
yet, that blinding light
forbids me thus.
Reasoning with the truth--
the taste of sweet happiness found within.
However, I beg for the Release,
it seems a eternal apart,
the massive trials blocking this passage.
The waiting is etheral,
the wishing foolishly empty.
If you happen to enter
those golden gates first...
please wait for me.
There is nothing I desire more
than being up there with you.
Everything is just plain illusions ,
filled with isolating solitude
and persistent impatience.
Yet, I continue this struggling path
to seek out my paradise,
our resting place.
Amazing Grace,
how sweet it is!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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