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My Bright Star

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 08-20-99 06:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

I was destined to know you
My bright star
I saw something in your eyes from afar
Without realizing... you told me
This is my destiny

From that day forward
I looked deeply into your eyes
For you had a message for me
I had to uncover the hidden lies

For my true self has been uncovered
Deeply from your eyes
Which I used as a mirror
To merge from my disguise

An angel sent from another time
Sent to wrap your wings around me
To help me fly swiftly
Through my chosen path

The brilliance of your nature
Surrounds my mind
An outstanding feature
Easy to find

You have touched my soul
And I'll never let you go
My spirit will lay beside you
As you lay yourself to sleep

Thank you...My Bright Star
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Severn
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1 posted 08-21-99 06:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is absolutely beautiful, Dark Angel - can't let it slip away unnoticed. I love the line - "Sent to wrap your wings around me"
Dark Angel
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2 posted 08-21-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

why thank you Severn
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 08-21-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Yes, an incredibly beautiful poem...I can definitely relate to your sentiments. Keep up the great work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

miriam
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4 posted 08-26-99 02:16 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

you have a great talent. you've opened up a door of hope with this poem. also, thank you for responding to mine.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 08-29-99 06:52 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Alwye, Thank you

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miriam, thank you so much and you're welcome
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 08-29-99 08:04 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark Angel,
Enjoyed the poem
He's one lucky him.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 08-29-99 08:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Seymour...Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
This poem was actually written for my best friend Giulia, who helped me come out of my shell and realise exactly who I was and still am.
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8 posted 08-29-99 12:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It is sweet! I am glad you ofund who you are.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Dark Angel
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9 posted 08-29-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Elizabeth
~one voice~
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10 posted 08-30-99 01:55 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

This is a very beautiful poem, Dark Angel... Very honest, very heart-felt... I enjoyed it very much!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


 
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