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My Bright Star
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My Bright Star |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I was destined to know you My bright star I saw something in your eyes from afar Without realizing... you told me This is my destiny From that day forward I looked deeply into your eyes For you had a message for me I had to uncover the hidden lies For my true self has been uncovered Deeply from your eyes Which I used as a mirror To merge from my disguise An angel sent from another time Sent to wrap your wings around me To help me fly swiftly Through my chosen path The brilliance of your nature Surrounds my mind An outstanding feature Easy to find You have touched my soul And I'll never let you go My spirit will lay beside you As you lay yourself to sleep Thank you...My Bright Star |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is absolutely beautiful, Dark Angel - can't let it slip away unnoticed. I love the line - "Sent to wrap your wings around me" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
why thank you Severn |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, an incredibly beautiful poem...I can definitely relate to your sentiments. Keep up the great work!!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
you have a great talent. you've opened up a door of hope with this poem. also, thank you for responding to mine. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Alwye, Thank you -------- miriam, thank you so much and you're welcome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, Enjoyed the poem He's one lucky him. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour...Thank you so much for your lovely comment. This poem was actually written for my best friend Giulia, who helped me come out of my shell and realise exactly who I was and still am. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It is sweet! I am glad you ofund who you are. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Elizabeth |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
This is a very beautiful poem, Dark Angel... Very honest, very heart-felt... I enjoyed it very much! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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