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elvira
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0 posted 08-20-99 04:05 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for elvira



[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
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caroline
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1 posted 08-20-99 06:45 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

GREAT! My giggle for the day! Thanks!


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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Sue
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2 posted 08-20-99 07:39 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

This is a masterpiece! And I echo the good wishes for Toerag.
Dragoness
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3 posted 08-20-99 08:00 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Cute!!!

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-20-99 08:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elvira,
When you smile or fun
it is so well done. LOL
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5 posted 08-20-99 11:08 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

elvira: I love it!!! *G* And I hope you don't mind me emailing this one to Toe... I don't want him to miss it!
elvira
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6 posted 08-20-99 07:23 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
Skyfyre
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7 posted 08-20-99 09:31 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This was adorable ... I wanted to read one of your poems because I noticed that you gave very thoughtful replies to others I had read ... do you have any other favorites posted that you might suggest I read?

I am new to the forums ... but I have already been swept up in the battle of words between Toerag and Balladeer ... so what happened to Toerag?



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Fred Hobbs
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8 posted 08-20-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Nice going Elvira, I would've probably used it in a payphone but then I wouldn't have gotten a poem out of it. Great rhyme and meter.

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elvira
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9 posted 08-21-99 04:28 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira



[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
moonmoon
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I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin'

Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day..
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I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin'

Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day..
moonmoon
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Oops sorry.. I posted it twice...That was an error
 
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