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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-20 01:42 AM


Enchanted...

I feel your hands
massaging away...
Mesmerizing
my mind.
Capturing
the essence
of your strength,
as I become
enchanted...
By the
tenderness
of your fingertips.

© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-20 02:43 AM


This is lovely! Liked it a lot!



hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-08-20 09:00 AM


Oh...I do like this one

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 1999-08-20 09:37 AM


Thank-You, both kindly for your responses, it's very much appreciated.
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4 posted 1999-08-20 10:31 AM


Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccceeee. *G*
Craig
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5 posted 1999-08-20 12:35 PM


How could anyone be anything other than 'enchanted' with your Poetry.

(Thanks for the replies to my rambles BTW )

Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 1999-08-20 12:39 PM


suthern, Thank-You for your response, glad you liked it. I was just sitting back on the chair last night imagining the delight I would feel from a Massage. Unfortunetly the fingertips I desired were miles away.
Nicole
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7 posted 1999-08-20 01:33 PM


Oh this is lovely! Like it a lot.

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*

Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 1999-08-20 06:41 PM


Craig: Thank-You for you compliment

Satiate: Glad you liked it, Thank-You for reading.

doreen peri
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9 posted 1999-08-20 07:00 PM


The beach is beautiful. You should have seen Charlie Daniels Band! This is a pretty cool poem. How's my cat? Too bad bridges bum you out. See ya tomorrow night. Lots of nautical stuff to write!!! -dp
Lost Dreamer
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10 posted 1999-08-20 07:22 PM


Doreen,
Sorry I could not join you, i would have loved seeing Charlie danials Band, that's why I attempted to come over there, I hope I can concur this fear someday. glad your having a great time, Your cat is great, he slept with Michelle last night. Have a safe trip home, We'll be here to greet you I think.

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