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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-08-19 07:49 PM


Before I can...

I reach out my hand
to grasp for yours,
but it's just not there.
I speak in words
of loves caress,
yet it falls
on deafened ears.
I wait for you
longing for your touch,
only feeling sadder,
as each hour passes.

An image
of the man I love
stands in front of me,
before I can...reach,
before I can...speak,
before I can...receive,
he turns and walks away,
as if his eyes were blind.

© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-08-19 08:11 PM


I like this one

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 1999-08-19 08:36 PM


hoot_owl_rn: Thank-You, I was not sure if I really liked it, I felt a bit insecure about it I guess, but it was to late to remove, so I left it. Thanks again.
RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
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3 posted 2002-02-11 07:23 PM


i like it too nicely worded
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-01 04:59 AM


sad
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