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and word came from you today...

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caroline
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0 posted 08-19-99 06:30 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

...and word came from you today
a little note to say
that you still think of me
and I felt
my heart melt
like chocolate
on a hot sidewalk

...and to your hello I replied
and though I tried
I couldn't say it to you
it is pride
makes me hide
and keep that distance

...and so it went, and once again
you wrote to me and then
you said you missed me
in my eyes
a million cries
have had their run
I saved them in a jar

...and one more time I wrote
'twas just a little note
only three words said
~I've missed you~
you know its true
our time has come again
we never said goodbye

caroline
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1 posted 08-19-99 07:52 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I'm smiling....
pen of passion
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2 posted 08-19-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I like your similes.
Delores Hall
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Enjoyed your poem.
caroline
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4 posted 08-20-99 06:25 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

thanks everyone I'm feeling right at home here! I just wish I had a couple of weeks with nothing to do but read!

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5 posted 08-20-99 11:26 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great poem... and welcome!
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