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Cinderella
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since 06-23-99
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0 posted 08-19-99 04:31 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cinderella

To hold you and stroke your back is exciting,

Your loud noises make me wild with delight.

We've finally found each other entwined,

For here we are after weeks reuniting.

That other woman appeared at my front gate,

Tenderly holding on to you I almost fainted!

Why did you go with her, what did I do wrong?

Every morn and night you had food on a plate.

I gave you my lovin' and all that I had,

Clean sheets and feathered pillows were there

Containing my warm body for you to lie upon.

Those days you were gone I was so very sad.

Never again, no I will never let you go away

Your wish is my command and happy will I be.

Unexpected tears did surely come quickly,

My dear kitty cat - please never again stray!
© Copyright 1999 Cinderella - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 08-19-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ahh, you're taking lessons from Balladeer. Well done.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


elvira
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2 posted 08-19-99 06:03 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i can certainly relate to that, Cinderella...i have one outside cat who likes to roam, she comes home every 2 or 3 days...at first i used to be horribly worried, now i have gotten used to it...give your kitty and extra treat from me
Balladeer
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3 posted 08-19-99 06:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Cinderella
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since 06-23-99
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4 posted 08-19-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Thanks for enjoying my little ditty, Sunshine and Elvira! But Balladeer my pussy cat is cuter than yours...hee hee
Poet deVine
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5 posted 08-19-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Just like little kids, we worry about them. I have 3 - I'd like to keep them in one room, but they like it outside too......cute poem.
Delores Hall
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6 posted 08-20-99 12:20 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

That's funny,you just remineded me I haven't
seen my cat in a few days.Have to go a look
for him.Happy writing.
Cinderella
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7 posted 08-20-99 03:59 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Amazing how attached we get to our purr-fect
pets!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 08-20-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Cinderella,
You brought back memories of the one I had for 16 years. Nice job.
Cinderella
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9 posted 08-20-99 01:13 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Thank you Sy, for your comments are appreciated deeply - you are one of my favorite posters in "Passions"
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
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10 posted 08-20-99 01:17 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Cinderella

Yanno
It doesn't take much
To set me off
On a
kitty-kicking rampage!!!
Please keep that in mind
In the future.
I am only a mere man,
Weak in my selfcontrol
Given to rabid visions
Just this once
I'll not write a mean poem
About our feline masters.
But, just this once.

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 08-20-99).]
Cinderella
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11 posted 08-20-99 02:41 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

LngJhnAg: Please control yourself! MEOW
Starith
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12 posted 08-22-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Nice twist at the end...really enjoyed it
Cinderella
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13 posted 08-22-99 10:07 PM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

Welcome Starith to "Passions" and thank you for you comments.
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