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Sue
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since 1999-08-04
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France

0 posted 1999-08-19 02:43 PM


Don't shun me if I have a brain
You wouldn't like it done to you
Loneliness can cause such pain
A genius has feelings too

Don't laugh at me if I'm not bright
You wouldn't laugh if it were you
Cruel laughter's just not right
An idiot has feelings too

Don't point at me if I am lame
You wouldn't point if it were you
Inside this shell I'm just the same
An invalid has feelings too

Don't hate me if my skin's not white
Inside this hide I'm just like you
And if you hate me I will fight
We coloured men have feelings too

Be kind to all who live on earth
It's not so very hard to do
Give of your joy, your love, your mirth
And show that you have feelings too

© Copyright 1999 Sue - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-08-19 02:49 PM


Wonderful!

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-08-19 03:01 PM


Absolutely right on, Sue. If only it could be..... Terrific poem!
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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3 posted 1999-08-19 03:35 PM


Words that need to be heard! Well done!

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*

Sue
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since 1999-08-04
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4 posted 1999-08-19 04:34 PM


Thank you - I've done better, but it was something I wanted to say.
Craig
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since 1999-06-10
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5 posted 1999-08-19 04:47 PM



This line could have been written for me
'An idiot has feelings too'

Good message, great poem.

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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California
6 posted 1999-08-19 06:00 PM


well said, Sue !!!
Colin
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Callington, Cornwall, England
7 posted 1999-08-19 06:12 PM


can't argue with that! *8)
JP
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since 1999-05-25
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Loomis, CA
8 posted 1999-08-19 06:35 PM




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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP


wordweaver
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since 1999-08-19
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south carolina
9 posted 1999-08-19 06:42 PM


so true and yet we so ofen forget. well said.
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