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Deb Lynne
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since 1999-08-19
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 1999-08-19 01:45 PM


Everytime I see a sunset
Gently setting across the sky
I travel back in memories
To another day gone by

The colors of the sunset
As I remember them that day
Captured all my emotions
When you looked at me that way

As we sat together
And you opened up your heart
I knew that from that moment
We'd never be apart

You allowed me to see
The tender side no one else knew
And as the sunset faded
I fell in love with you

© Copyright 1999 Deb Lynne - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

1 posted 1999-08-19 03:03 PM


Nice poem...
thanks for posting it...

Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
2 posted 1999-08-19 03:05 PM


Really evocative.
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-08-19 05:37 PM


Welcome to the forums, Deb

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PS: have you been to "The Alley" lately and cast your vote for "on a roll"?

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-08-19 07:36 PM


Very nice visual......

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-08-19 07:42 PM


Welcome to the family! I loved your poem and am looking forward to reading more from you!


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