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So my halo's not on straight...?! So what !!

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 08-19-99 01:18 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I used to be so prim & proper * *
I put on quite the show !!
And everyone saw Innocence -
But little did they know!

Inside my soul was bottled up
A fantasy erotic -
Look in my eyes & see my fire
I can be quite hypnotic ! (LOL)

This little angel does have horns -
I'm not afraid to say....
I can be oh so ettiquette * *
But naughty's how I play !

So many now say,"Wow, she's forward!"
I love my sensuality ! !
I'm open to most anything
I've finally set the cave-girl free !

I don't mean to offend you -
Or scare you all away....
I only try to make the most -
Of every single day .....

Our days down here are numbered, and
if I can make you smile -
I'd say my time down here has been
Definately - worthwhile....! ! ***curtsies***

P.S.

If you see me in the "naughty" room-
You'll probably drop your drink -
It's there I post my "better" stuff
In here, my rhymes do stink !!


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet



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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 08-19-99 01:23 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

WhtDove
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2 posted 08-19-99 01:36 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

lol...this was a good one I thought! Loved it!
Nicole
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3 posted 08-19-99 02:02 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh run with it girl! You certainly do make the most of every day, and to me, that is an inspiration. Well done!! **seen the naughty stuff, haven't dropped a drink....yet...almost though!!**
Sue
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4 posted 08-19-99 02:56 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Your rhymes do not stink.
Balladeer
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5 posted 08-19-99 03:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If you change one hair on that head, I'm coming up there to spank ya! Oh, yeah, you'd probably like that, wouldn't ya?! Don't change a thing. You make my daydreams so vivid!!
elvira
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6 posted 08-19-99 05:50 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

just having read your "pity party"...i am glad to see you snapped out of it
pen of passion
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7 posted 08-19-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

PoetFatale, I take back my generous offer to share.
Christopher
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8 posted 08-19-99 10:09 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

as usual!


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Sanity is the playground for the unimaginative.

Alwye
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9 posted 08-19-99 10:10 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

LOL, great PFF!! I especially liked "And everyone saw Innocence -But little did they know!"...reminds me of myself, thats for sure!! Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

Poetwheel
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10 posted 08-19-99 10:13 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

I love flirty poems...to quote Austin Powers, "They're sooo.....saucy! Yeah Baby! Yeahhhh!" Thanks!

PW

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Poet deVine
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11 posted 08-19-99 10:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

"To thine own self be true"

Great poem...you do have a flair for flirting that is accentuated in the Adult Forum.... too bad more 'guys' don't jump over there and read you........(hint)
CSwtThng
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12 posted 08-19-99 11:07 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Very good work! Brought a smile to my face!
:0 :0
Severn
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13 posted 08-20-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Tchtchtchtchtchtch! x several 100 or so.
Delores Hall
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14 posted 08-20-99 12:25 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Cute.Liked your poem.
wayoutwalt
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15 posted 08-20-99 12:30 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

is my wife lookin is it ok to comment..wow yuh wow
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Beautiful poem 'Miss prim & proper'..(*wink*)I am on my way to the adult's forum to see your naughty stuff...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


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17 posted 08-20-99 11:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Don't worry 'bout that tarnish
You need not waste your time
Polishing that halo
Just keep sharing your rhyme!
blueloon
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18 posted 08-21-99 11:19 AM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

PoetFemme- Your work and additude continue to amaze me each and every day. Everything just keeps getting better!
blueloon
Lorelei54
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19 posted 08-21-99 11:32 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

PFF...at least you have a halo
A little crooked, but so what?
I lost mine the day I met LJA
And haven't found it yet!

I agree with you about enjoying sensuality...and being open to just about anything...lifes experiences are worth having in my book!!!

ps..where is that "naughty room"?
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 08-21-99 11:53 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PFF,
So you have a book on humor and wisdom too.
I've looked al over hell for one and can't find any. Loved your poem.
poetFemmeFatale
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21 posted 08-21-99 12:37 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh Lorelei, you're so silly ! Just talk to deVine if you're interested in the "naughty room".....she gives out the directions as to how to get there, and girl, you'll LOVE it !! Never a dull moment! We'd love to have you !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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22 posted 08-21-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Aahh blueloon, your words of praise make me **blush** you're too kind !! ( HA I don't BLUSH!)

And to Seymour, no wonder you haven't found it, you're not looking in the right spot....try your underware drawer !! All the answers are in there! he he he And Lawrd knows WHAT else ! LOL

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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