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My Heroine

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-19-99 10:21 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This scarred heart has been broken once more.
I doubt that I'll ever get used to it.
Despite my hate truly her I adore.
She owns me more than I like to admit.

I doubt that I'll ever get used to it.
She always seem to play me for a fool.
She owns me more than I like to admit.
The witch is my master and not my tool.

She always seem to play me for a fool.
She entices me then carves up my heart.
The witch is my master and not my tool.
I admit that I knew it from the start.


She entices me then carves up my heart.
The rush of her embrace floods through each vein.
I admit that I knew it from the start.
I hate her as she saves me from my pain.

The rush of her embrace floods through each vein.
My lover is also my heroine.
I hate her as she saves me from my pain.
You see now I'm a slave to heroin.

My lover is also my heroine.
Despite my hate truly her I adore.
You see now I'm a slave to heroin.
This scarred heart has been broken once more.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-19-99 10:25 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This is toned down, the original is in Adult.
~one voice~
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2 posted 08-19-99 01:27 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

This is powerful, Dream, though your posting in Adult is much more so.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Sue
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3 posted 08-19-99 03:28 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I haven't seen the adult one yet, but I thought this was great. Let's celebrate the year of the pantoum!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-19-99 04:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
You have a propensity for sorrow
And the non existant tomorrow.
I know you can see heaven and hell.
But I'm also sure someone some where,
Will come and ring your bell.
elvira
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5 posted 08-19-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

you are getting quite good with those pantoums
Nan
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6 posted 08-19-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

'Tis a pantoum day...... I see a lot of hours of work from you today, DE.... nice job..
Gentle Soul
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7 posted 08-20-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

*hugs* Im speechless.. I dont know why.. hehe.. but I am.. but I want to reply

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Dragoness
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8 posted 08-20-99 02:34 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

I like the way you say addiction then refer to being owned.Isn't that what addicts are? Well done,very deep meaning in this one.If one cares to look.Thank-You for making me think once again,brother!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
DreamEvil
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9 posted 08-20-99 06:16 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank Nan, she introduced me to pantoums and I LOVE the format!!
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