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Too Good to be True

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Dom Mart
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since 08-17-99
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0 posted 08-19-99 08:13 AM       View Profile for Dom Mart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dom Mart's Home Page   View IP for Dom Mart


There is a nearly perfect race
Inhabiting the oddest place.
The women are all trim and pure,
The men, successful and secure.
They're handsome, cultured full of fun
And waiting for that "special one":
An SWF who likes to dance,
Walk on the beach, take a chance.
Here DWF and SBM
Can can transform "one" into "them,"
And make a paradise of it,
Full of warmth, affection, wit.
Yes,these are truly wondrous souls,
Citizens of the "Personals."
Such lovely gals and manly guys,
Why do they have to advertise?
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Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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1 posted 08-19-99 08:51 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

I guess they are pressed for time. Enjoyed the read
Sue
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since 08-04-99
Posts 407
France


2 posted 08-19-99 08:57 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Good question. Good poem.
elvira
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since 07-06-99
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3 posted 08-19-99 05:28 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i agree with Seymour...though exaggeration is common in the personal ads...hardly any one sounds original (same, or worse, in chat rooms)
 
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