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I Am Content Again

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-19-99 04:41 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Agonized waiting lies before me,
soon the axe will surely fall.
An escape from fate I cannot see,
except rebuilding my wall.

Against me my truths do conspire,
fighting inside my own mind.
My lonely soul burns me like fire,
anything more is unkind.

I was once emotionally cold,
a dead thing hidden within.
I've become so again truth be told,
it only seems to deepen.

I am back where I truly belong,
cloaked in shadows where I'm safe.
For this still peace I have waited long,
chaos had begun to chafe.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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~one voice~
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1 posted 08-19-99 05:04 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, this dark, but beautiful. Why would you think I wouldn't like it? I do very much.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Dragoness
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2 posted 08-19-99 05:46 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done,dark as usual,but still well done brother.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 08-19-99 09:50 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
Some wonderful lines, you have become one of my favorites.
WhtDove
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4 posted 08-19-99 10:08 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Have to state you are a talented writer. But I long to see you come out of this darkness.
Kelly
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5 posted 08-19-99 11:56 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I love it. You have captured some of my own feelings and thoughts.
Nan
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6 posted 08-19-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nicely done, DE.....
pen of passion
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7 posted 08-19-99 09:37 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

You're complicated.
Alwye
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8 posted 08-19-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

a dark work, my friend. I like it..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

Gentle Soul
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9 posted 08-19-99 11:57 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

*hugs* well written.. I love it brother.. but I agree with Wht Dove...

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DreamEvil
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10 posted 08-20-99 06:11 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Complex? Me?

I find myself to be simple and shallow, I think there are some that would agree with that.
caroline
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11 posted 08-20-99 06:32 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I think anyone who feels things as deeply as you obviously do could hardly be called shallow or simple...I like your writing, dark though it may be. It is honest

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
 
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