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elvira
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[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
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Engrossing tale and appealing format, my dear.

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Sue
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It's always upsetting when we are faced with the raw cruelty of nature.
There are even people who can cry over an injured kitten and beat someone to death on the same day. Fortunately more people are like you - except at writing poetry, of course, in that you are better than most.
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Elvira,
Engrossing is the word and enjoyed the sad tale.
elvira
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sawthe entire thing as I read, realy well done.
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Great story well told!!!
elvira
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This is great! I have a passion for lions - cats in general. (Loved the Lion King!)
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A good piece. Well done Elvira...The plight of the cubs, was captivating...I am glad you added that soothing touch to the end..The hope that they survived...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


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