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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 1999-08-18 10:55 PM


I see you in the mirror your eyes have tiny lines.
The way you smile back at me the same way every time.
I hear your voice, I hear your laugh the humors just the same.
The way you get frustrated by the curly hair you try to tame.
The same gentle hands that reach to touch a loved one standing close.
These are all the things I miss and think about the most.
Because its not you standing there in the mirror that I see.
The woman that’s reflected, that looks so much like you …is me.


[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 08-18-99).]

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DARILYN SUE
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since 1999-08-03
Posts 22
HOUSTON, TX
1 posted 1999-08-19 12:09 PM


LUCIE THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM ABOUT YOUR MOTHER. IT IS SO SWEET.
Lucie
Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
2 posted 1999-08-19 01:05 AM


Thank you.. I appreciate you reading it.

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-08-19 01:13 AM


Yes, very very beautiful!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood


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