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Knife of Life

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Haskins
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since 06-26-99
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0 posted 08-18-99 09:07 PM       View Profile for Haskins   Email Haskins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Haskins's Home Page   View IP for Haskins

In times a-gone,
In times a-past
In hearts torn apart
By shredded glass,
Through needle eyes
And blades of grass,
As looming, booming
Clouds amass,

Through searing fear
And games of chance
Upon the knife of life
I dance.

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William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

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Delores Hall
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1 posted 08-18-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Interesting poem.
Tim
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2 posted 08-18-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Either you took a short hiatus or I have missed your postings...
although your style is a little obtuse at times for my tastes.. as I said previously, you are one of the poets I always try and read because you are interesting....in any event.. glad to see your works again...
Haskins
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3 posted 08-18-99 10:03 PM       View Profile for Haskins   Email Haskins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Haskins's Home Page   View IP for Haskins

Obtuse, eh? As in "lacking quickness of perception or intellect"?

An interesting assessment, to say the least. Glad to hear you read my work, though... I'll try to sharpen it up a bit...

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http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

 
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