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Haskins
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since 1999-06-26
Posts 85
Dallas, TX

0 posted 1999-08-18 09:07 PM


In times a-gone,
In times a-past
In hearts torn apart
By shredded glass,
Through needle eyes
And blades of grass,
As looming, booming
Clouds amass,

Through searing fear
And games of chance
Upon the knife of life
I dance.

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William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm


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Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
1 posted 1999-08-18 09:49 PM


Interesting poem.
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

2 posted 1999-08-18 09:55 PM


Either you took a short hiatus or I have missed your postings...
although your style is a little obtuse at times for my tastes.. as I said previously, you are one of the poets I always try and read because you are interesting....in any event.. glad to see your works again...

Haskins
Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 85
Dallas, TX
3 posted 1999-08-18 10:03 PM


Obtuse, eh? As in "lacking quickness of perception or intellect"?

An interesting assessment, to say the least. Glad to hear you read my work, though... I'll try to sharpen it up a bit...

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William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm


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