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tamlyn
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0 posted 08-18-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for tamlyn   Email tamlyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tamlyn

falling...

...falling into your eyes
your voice
your smile
until i reach your soul
and feel the heat
...hearing what you say
with my heart
with my soul
until i understand
and hear the beat
...dancing to your song
your laugh
your joy
until the music ends
the laughter fades
...wondering if your heart
your destiny
your journey
will bring you back to me
our dream awaits...

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1 posted 08-19-99 01:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I read this as a dream. If I am correct, let me know.

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Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Sue
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2 posted 08-19-99 03:03 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I read it as a very new love - is it real? I liked it.
tamlyn
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it is a new love, i wrote it at about 3 a.m.- when i knew how i felt, but not how he felt... a few days later i found out it was mutual! ( my best friend for 3 years!)
:-)we are very happy...

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