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Last night I dreamt in color...

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Master
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since 08-18-99
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0 posted 08-18-99 07:30 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Last night I dreamt in color
Of dark gray sky with scars
Left by the fallen stars
Which landed in my hand
And turned into a flower
And blossomed on my land

Her petals moist with dew
I could not help but stare
Her fragrance filled the air
The flower reached for light
She looked so real and true
Her beauty seized my sight

I could not turn my head
I could not get enough
I knew I was in love
I sat there on my porch
And she was all I had
The flower let me watch

The flower let me touch
The flower let me tame
I gave her a new name
And I would call her Rose
She liked the name so much
For me she’d strike a pose

She loved to be admired
It gave her purpose to exist
She’d dress up in the mist
It kept her warm like fur
And all that I desired
Was to remain with her

Last night I dreamt in color
I woke up from the sun
My Rose was long time gone
Although I held her tight
My love could not restrain a flower
What dreams may come tonight!


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 08-18-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I think this is a beautiful piece, and it brought a smile. Nice work and welcome to the forums.


Nan
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2 posted 08-18-99 08:06 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like your poem.....and your signature too....
Master
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3 posted 08-18-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I'm glad you liked it. I wrote this poem when I was only 13, but it still is one of my favorites.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
 
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