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bad girl (an attempt at free verse)

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elvira
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[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
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bad,girl. (hehe...couldn't resist)

Actually, I would have to have this one explained to me.
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Elvira - Did you read my
"I AM lost and foundering without my rhyme"?

I hereby give you special permission to write a rhyming poem ... no matter what those free versers say........
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I always feel so simple minded when I read free verse and don't understand a word of it! It sounds, however, like this poem is saying something really, really insightful. It "feels" like a poem about the carefree infatuated feeling. But don't ask me to explain why it feels like that! I like it!
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[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]
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Huh?

 
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