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Dyan
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since 1999-08-12
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0 posted 1999-08-18 06:47 PM


She sits upon the floral mats of her imitation wicker lawn furiture

though her lawn is actually a forever-and-a-day ficus and a pincushion cactus

which her tabby happens often and cries as she did earlier this day this hour

this minute her only is pacing about the sidewalk cracks careless of his mother's

back on the balcony in a voice stirred with confidence, tears, and a teaspoon of vinegarette she screams,

"I love you did you know that?"

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-08-18 09:25 PM


Welcome! Ok. I'm not sure I get this.. please don't be offended....just let me know what you were getting at......thanks!

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