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Palindrome.

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Sue
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0 posted 08-18-99 02:55 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sue

I apologise for this, I'm in an experimental mood at the moment.

When you smile
Sun breaks through the clouds
That sail above in galleon style;
Day's damp and misty shrouds
That sail above in galleon style.
Sun breaks through the clouds
When you smile.
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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 08-18-99 03:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sue,
Never apologize for experimentation. I liked it.
Toerag
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2 posted 08-18-99 03:23 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I liked it too..........If it weren't for experimentation...I wouldn't write nuthin?......Ummm...on second thought....that's not a great example.....Ummmm?...Keep experimenting dear, you do well at it...this is good!
Nan
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3 posted 08-18-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is nice - I like it
Palindromes are fun, aren't they?

How about.....
Sunshine breaking above shrouds above breaking Sunshine..
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4 posted 08-18-99 07:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I like it, Sue. Structure can indeed be fun.
Severn
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5 posted 08-19-99 12:49 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Apologise for what exactly? It's great, very cyclic in idea as well as form, such a lovely choice of topic.
 
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