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Seymour Tabin
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Common

They say she has a common way,
With a very common say.
And that she talks a common talk,
With a very common walk.
Her manners are of common lace
And they say of common grace.
She has a very common smile
And her eyes a common style.
Her laughter is a common round,
Just an average common sound,
But when she lays her hand in mine,
All that's common, turns divine.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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I thought this was great! Loved the end!!!
Sue
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A very uncommon poem.
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sweet, Seymour
Severn
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Great, as per usual! Love the one line break without the word 'common'. You know if it had 2 more lines it could be a contemporary sonnet, with a couplet at the end.
Seymour Tabin
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All of the above my dear friend I thank.
Thank you for your comments and read.
 
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