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Tonight I met a fallen angel...

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Master
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0 posted 08-18-99 03:02 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Tonight I met a fallen angel
Who came to me from up above
Who would have thought that in a stranger
Someone like me could find love

Her voice was friendly and unique
Her eyes were glittering with sparks
She used my silent thoughts to speak
And always laughed at my remarks

She promised that she wouldn’t wake me
If I was dreaming all of this
She swore to me that she would take me
Beyond the boundaries of a kiss

My eyes were swimming in her soul
I realized that I’ve been blessed
The clock was ticking on the wall
My heart was tacking in my chest

My heart could not believe my sight
I walked her home and held her hand
And in response to my “good-night”
She said, “when can I see you once again?”

And yet our date was never finished
The clock alarm rang in her head
And in a flash I was diminished
And she woke up tucked in her bed


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-18-99 03:14 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

A very beautiful piece here - although I'm a bit confused....are you the one in bed dreaming, or is she ? Is she the angel, or are you? Hhmmm? I read it over a few times, but I'm still lost - help me! It's late, and I'm pobably just half asleep....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

elvira
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2 posted 08-18-99 03:41 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

Welcome to the forums M... (your complete nickname is reserved for someone special in my live )

[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-18-99).]
WhtDove
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3 posted 08-18-99 01:18 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I thought this was quite good, but I too am confused. She wouldn't wake you,(so it's your dream). Then she wakes up tucked in her bed? (Her dream?)
Master
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4 posted 08-18-99 01:23 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

"Two dreamers met in dreams"--thanks for your comments.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 08-18-99 09:32 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. I got it! She was dreaming that a man was dreaming of her! Good one!
Master
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6 posted 08-18-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

There you go, you go it. I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad to be here.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
 
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