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Open Poetry #1

Forgive me Love...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-18 02:00 AM

Forgive me Love for this disgrace
The love I feel is just unheard of
The way I love makes lovers sort of
Appear as lacking love and taste

With love I ask for your forgiveness
For being loved and loving truly
For being pure, forgive me fully
Forgive me Love my love’s uniqueness

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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-18-99).]

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-18-99).]

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-18 02:27 AM

Wow, you are very brand new to this room! Welcome welcome, and such a powerful little piece, as we all like to see! Short & so sweet! Isn't is amazing how much one can say with so few a words? Glad to have you, keep writing!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

2 posted 1999-08-18 09:35 AM

Uniquely Done.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-08-18 01:24 PM

Thanks for your comments. Glad to be here.

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

4 posted 1999-08-18 02:23 PM

Welcome Master! What a grad entrance. Loved your post and look forward to many more.
blueloon

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

5 posted 1999-08-18 03:21 PM

Thanks Blueloon! I'm glad to be here and there are plenty more poems to come.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

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