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Forgive me Love...

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Master
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since 08-18-99
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0 posted 08-18-99 02:00 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Forgive me Love for this disgrace
The love I feel is just unheard of
The way I love makes lovers sort of
Appear as lacking love and taste

With love I ask for your forgiveness
For being loved and loving truly
For being pure, forgive me fully
Forgive me Love my love’s uniqueness


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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-18-99).]

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-18-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
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1 posted 08-18-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, you are very brand new to this room! Welcome welcome, and such a powerful little piece, as we all like to see! Short & so sweet! Isn't is amazing how much one can say with so few a words? Glad to have you, keep writing!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

pen of passion
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2 posted 08-18-99 09:35 AM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Uniquely Done.
Master
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3 posted 08-18-99 01:24 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks for your comments. Glad to be here.
blueloon
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4 posted 08-18-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Welcome Master! What a grad entrance. Loved your post and look forward to many more.
blueloon
Master
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5 posted 08-18-99 03:21 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Blueloon! I'm glad to be here and there are plenty more poems to come.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
 
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