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jfreak
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since 06-17-99
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0 posted 08-18-99 01:08 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

Listening ears are quite subtle
When the whining is so obtruse
Crying eyes see double
After tedious abuse
Idle hands are so much trouble
When left to those who have no clue
A rambling tongue is unlovable
When spite is all the vomit is spews
© Copyright 1999 jfreak - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
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1 posted 08-18-99 01:21 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Pretty powerful poem...and not a word wasted. Nice work j...

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"To waken doubt in one
Holding so fast by thine infinity;
So surely anchored on
The steadfast rock of immortality." ...Emily Bronte, "Last Lines"
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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2 posted 08-18-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, very interesting piece ! I agree with Sally, you sure know how to say alot with short & sassy lines !! (not really sassy - it's late & my vocabulary is tired...) Apologies... Short & firey, maybe? My spelling is Fuzzy too - um, is that how you spell "fire - ee" ? LOL

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

jfreak
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3 posted 08-18-99 11:30 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Thanx guys so much. Hey Femme drink less coffee and get more sleep. *wink* I just put this poem together after reading some of the different poems on here. I have been in a poetical famine lately and I seem to have had a breakthrough. WooHOO!!!!

Jfreak
WhtDove
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4 posted 08-18-99 12:53 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What can I say? The words have already been spoken. Big things come in small packages!!!
blueloon
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5 posted 08-18-99 01:10 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I believe that I have said this once before, "I love your work." I feel as if you have written what I can't, but truely think. If that makes any sense at all! Keep posting please!
blueloon
jfreak
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6 posted 08-18-99 05:48 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

thank you all so very much. You humble me with your words. I am truly thankful.

Jfreak
 
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