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Betrayal

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DarkChiild
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0 posted 08-18-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

Betrayal
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It is the dying virtue
a betrayal yet to come
lost to me forever
al hope has come undone
an acronym for death
the soul's last dying breath
a name that's made to kill
the name does haunt me still
hence forth a word unspoken
for a word that's said in vein
the word forever broken
a word of double blame
for all I care
for all I dare
the word can sit and rust
for all that's left unspoken
there is no need for trust.


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Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first.

--DarkChiild--

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-18-99 01:18 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I REALLY like the way you get so much power & punch out of the short lines of rhyme and meter!! As always with your work, very unique & deep emotion - very nice way to vent anger !! Keep writing !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

 
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