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Star upon the Horizon

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DarkChiild
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0 posted 08-18-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

A Star upon the Horizon
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A lack of understanding
confusion clouds the mind
the voice of reason resounding
yet gears of guilt do grind
The shackles have been broken
yet something ties her down
the familiar, the unseen force
her comfort did keep her bound
But who was I to say
that reason was the key
yet to this very day
I hope she'll one day see
The flame that burns so bright
to her is just a star
that could emit such vivid light
if only she weren't so far
So for now I sit in darkness
and hope she'll some day see
that the star upon the horizon
always was and will be me.


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Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first.

--DarkChiild--

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Alwye
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1 posted 08-18-99 01:01 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, very beautiful. I'm impressed..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
DarkChiild
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2 posted 08-18-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

Thanx alot Alwye! That means alot coming from you. I love everything I've read by u so far.

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Wish in one hand, then defecate in the other and see which one fills up first.

--DarkChiild--

Nan
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I like it....
 
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