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Toilet Bowl of lies...

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 08-18-99 12:49 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Why is it when
you think you have
a perfect love at last -
the one you love
decides to flush -
your mind starts swirling fast!

You thought you had
respect & trust &
good communication -
Instead you find
you've been his fool -
Pure humiliation...

He took a dump
on all the dreams
you & him had dreamt -
Everything from
out his mouth -
he's twisted, stretched & bent!

Now you find you're
sitting in - this
toilet bowl of lies -
Someone might as
well just flush - - -
you're starting to attract
****** FLIES ! ********

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-18-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very different! I guess we've all felt like this but you were the one to put it together so nicely! (Now while you're there, if you chance to add some TP, please roll it from the bottom!)
Alwye
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2 posted 08-18-99 12:58 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

LOL, yep, very different, but I liked it!! Great job!!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
Severn
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3 posted 08-18-99 01:53 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

It looks like you're masking deep pain by humour here (Oh OK - humor). Those men...

I knew a man
who gifted me
with my strength
light
and love

but
then the blinds drew
over my
suddenly startled heart

I gasped out
for love
cried out in the dark
but all that answered
was a quiet echo
of my voice

so stark
so hurt
so left

I crawled
this beggar, robbed
of strength
light
and love

I crawled
and I climbed
and I'm still climbing
yet

(Very very off the top of my head...I'll probably cringe later!)

I love your imagery - wish we could flush men down the toilet sometimes!
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 08-18-99 02:24 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Amen sister! Any turd deserves to be flushed - male or female! LOL And yes, I was masking pain with humor....and ya know what? It worked, cause I was so MAD when I wrote that, and just from the humor in it, it took my anger all away! Talk about inexpensive therapy, as I always say - writing sure does heal....Thanks sweetie!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Severn
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5 posted 08-18-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You are certainly very welcome. Have you seen the toilet paper disc. in The Alley? - Very appropriate! I'm off now, to find inspiration somewhere! s to you.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


6 posted 08-18-99 03:52 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I'm still trying to figure out what this tp is, doesn't everybody use leaves???
Interesting PFF, what a wry sense of humour (hehe) you have when you're angry. Please don't ever get mad at me, it stinks down there!

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Sanity is the playground for the unimaginative.

elvira
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7 posted 08-18-99 04:09 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

well now...before you flush...be sure to visit "The Alley" regarding toiletpaper and cast your vote for "on a roll"
Balladeer
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8 posted 08-18-99 07:23 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Who could make you feel this way? The CAD!!!
Remember....(1) Never love a four-flusher
(2) Never love a man named John
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 08-18-99 07:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dear PFF,
I'm sorry for your pain
as sorry as can be
It was a painful bane
and you had the proper key.

You flushed him good and well
and sent him straight to hell.
LOL *L*
redwriter1
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10 posted 08-18-99 07:49 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

I always roll my tp from the top!
Geesh, noone does it right.! hehehehe

Flush away girl!.. And slam the lid while you're at it! (smile)
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 08-18-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Writing is great therapy, isn't it? *G* Thanks for the grins!
Alicat
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12 posted 08-18-99 10:47 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Cathartic release!!! Yes...now am I free from the pain, angst, ennui and sorrow plaguing my frail psyche....crap...another life issue...will the trauma never end....


Opps...thought I was talking with my imaginary shrink.


Alicat
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 08-18-99 11:01 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I am a shrink, Ali - keep talking.....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Lucie
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14 posted 08-18-99 11:46 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

OK the title snagged me.. what great vision, you give such inspiration. I loved it.. kind of reminds me of the poem Balladeer wrote in the Adult Forum.. which everyone needs to visit.. (hint, hint) we dont get enough traffic in there. Besides... some of your best work is there PFF..hehe
WhtDove
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15 posted 08-18-99 12:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was humorous, and I am glad that you could find yourself laughing at it through the pain. If only we could just flush our problems, what a cheap solution! Great Job!!!
blueloon
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16 posted 08-18-99 01:06 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I wish that I had read this sooner! I needed a good belly laugh! Flush him right down the drain, slam the lid, and then peak to make sure he is gone. Just to make sure flush again! Keep up the great work!
blueloon
poetFemmeFatale
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17 posted 08-19-99 12:00 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Aahh - you guys keep me laughing so much it's unreal....thanks to everyone, and Lucie, I appreciate your comments on my Naughty poems! I enjoy writing those the most, I think!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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