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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-08-17 10:38 PM


I need my trucks
I need my trains
I need my cars my tanks
and cranes

I can't take a bath
without all the tools
please run my water
not too hot
not too cool

I need more suds
I need soap
I need my special
soap on a rope

I know how to do it!
I can do it myself
Don't look mom, I'm naked!
I don't want any help.

I tuck him in bed
with wet smelling hair
and kiss him on the cheek
but he wouldn't dare
let anyone know
I saw him that way

all wet and bare
and un-adorned
like the moment I first saw him
the day he was born


*** just written for amusement, amongst the serious, steamy tub series.. (grin)
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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes



[This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 08-17-99).]

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Carolina Girl
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since 1999-08-14
Posts 63

1 posted 1999-08-17 10:43 PM


I love bathtime at my house!! My best snuggles come from little naked bodies wrapped in towels..then they run around giggling at me because I'm giggling at them..and their little jiggly butts! lol! Ahhhh, your poem was great! Thank you for sharing your precious moments with me.
redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
2 posted 1999-08-17 11:03 PM


woo hooo.. I'm not the only one with little critters running around in towels and BVD's eh?.. (grin) Ain't it grand?

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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


Carolina Girl
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since 1999-08-14
Posts 63

3 posted 1999-08-17 11:14 PM


Yes it is!

I couldn't find your poem..maybe under another name? Searched The Arms Never Came.

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