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A Tear

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Blondie
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0 posted 08-17-99 05:26 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Blondie

A tear for every hurtful saying
A tear or two for every name
Another for each accusation
Angry words of pain.

A tear for all I do is wrong
A second for all I can't do right
Another, for the tone in your voice
For this I cry tears all night.

A tear for the night before
A second for all the things you said
Another because my eyes are sore
Angry words you don't regret.
© Copyright 1999 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
armanca
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1 posted 08-17-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for armanca   Email armanca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for armanca

I read your poem because there were no replies, and i know when i write something i like feedback. I loved your poem, and i can relate to it. And relating to a poem is what makes it a good poem. Well done!!!


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Blondie
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2 posted 08-17-99 10:22 PM       View Profile for Blondie   Email Blondie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blondie

Thank you very much for reading it and posting, means a lot.
Delores Hall
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3 posted 08-18-99 12:27 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

I don't think some people realize how hurt-
ful words can be.It can be worse then them
hitting you.I think it leaves a hole in
your heart.I have something someone e-mailed
about this subject.It's called the fence.If
you would like to read it,you can e-mail and
I will try to find it for you.I don't know
if I saved it though.Well happy writing.
Sue
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since 08-04-99
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4 posted 08-18-99 02:44 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I can relate to this, too. Hurtful words can really wear you down.
Nan
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5 posted 08-18-99 04:31 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How is it that we tolerate such behaviors? Seems wrong in retrospect, doesn't it?
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