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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-08-17 03:44 PM


Dark swan

Your love stays the shadows of my mind
In the depth of it's well.
And all the space between the last spell,
Who's thought reminds remind.

It cowers there in dark despair
Anchored in departures peer.
Hovering there in unrest and fear
Reluctant to undeclare.

And there seems to be no cure this lure
This anti matter thing.
It will stay with me till final spring
Until there be no more.

So tell me now of your dark swan and
Perhaps, why it is gone?

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-17 07:43 PM


Sy, I couldn't find a black swan for you - We only have white ones here on Cape Cod.....


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75




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Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-08-17 08:36 PM


I hope this isn't your swan song, Sy.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 1999-08-17 09:34 PM


They tell me I'm an ugly duckling...will I be a beautiful swan some day!?

Liked your poem, sir!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 1999-08-18 08:25 AM


Poet deVine,
People who can't see beyond the surface have no interest for me.
Beauty is in the mind of the beholder.
To me you are beautiful.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-18 04:29 AM


I love you style here!
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