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Dark swan

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-17-99 03:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark swan

Your love stays the shadows of my mind
In the depth of it's well.
And all the space between the last spell,
Who's thought reminds remind.

It cowers there in dark despair
Anchored in departures peer.
Hovering there in unrest and fear
Reluctant to undeclare.

And there seems to be no cure this lure
This anti matter thing.
It will stay with me till final spring
Until there be no more.

So tell me now of your dark swan and
Perhaps, why it is gone?
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Nan
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1 posted 08-17-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sy, I couldn't find a black swan for you - We only have white ones here on Cape Cod.....


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75




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2 posted 08-17-99 08:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I hope this isn't your swan song, Sy.
Poet deVine
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They tell me I'm an ugly duckling...will I be a beautiful swan some day!?

Liked your poem, sir!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 08-18-99 08:25 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Poet deVine,
People who can't see beyond the surface have no interest for me.
Beauty is in the mind of the beholder.
To me you are beautiful.
passing shadows
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I love you style here!
 
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