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In Reveries"

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Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


0 posted 08-17-99 03:10 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Skyfyre

In reveries
I touch your lips
With shy
And gentle fingertips,

All trembling as
They feel your kiss.
With such
Exquisite tenderness

And love, explore
Each last detail:
The warm
Caress of your exhale,

The sensuous curve
Of blush, below
The soft
Mustache that tickles so.

So real -- these dreams
Replete with you --
I would
My lips could have them too!

This was written for a man I love very deeply ... you know who you are.




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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")
© Copyright 1999 Linda Anderson - All Rights Reserved
traveler
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1 posted 08-17-99 04:55 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

This is lovely. Anticipating your future submissions.
pen of passion
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2 posted 08-17-99 10:02 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I like this one too.
Severn
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3 posted 08-17-99 10:12 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Divine. So soft and rhythmic. Im looking out for more.
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


4 posted 08-17-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Someone once told me that the best poetry comes from the heart ... this one did ... thank you for your compliments, they are appreciated.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Sue
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5 posted 08-18-99 02:25 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I love the "shy and gentle fingertips" Lovely, tender writing.
Dragoness
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6 posted 08-18-99 07:14 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nicely done !

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 08-18-99 07:51 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nachtdraco,
a delightful poem. Big TU
Nan
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8 posted 08-18-99 04:46 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is excellent!!!
Your message is lovely....and your meter and rhyme scheme is flawless (not to mention creative)
Very nice indeed......
Balladeer
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9 posted 08-18-99 04:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I agree with Nan. It's flawless. He'd better know who he is!
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


10 posted 08-20-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Thank you all so much ... yes, Balladeer, he does know who he is ... and Seymour ... what does TU mean..?

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 08-20-99 07:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderfully written. Excellent form, rhyme and rythym!!!! This is what a poem should be!!
traveler
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12 posted 08-25-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Sitting here, wistfully wishing this had been written for me, I have decided that,of your works you've posted todate, this is my favorite.
DreamEvil
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13 posted 08-25-99 09:58 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This then is truly a work of art, my friend.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Toerag
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14 posted 08-25-99 10:05 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Really sensuous and well done ma'am....I liked it!
passing shadows
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15 posted 04-17-2004 02:34 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very sweet
 
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