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Missed_fantasy
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0 posted 08-17-99 03:07 PM       View Profile for Missed_fantasy   Email Missed_fantasy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Missed_fantasy

Crashing rhythm thumping
in the dancing of the tide
Feel the booming waves hit
as the red fury subsides
Sunset orange and hot
the burning settles low
Lava flows inside the veins
as tempests raging blows
The rainfall's cooling water
serves to satisfy our thirst
The raindrops fall forever
helping in the new rebirth

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Love always and blessed be my children
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Toerag
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Ala bam a


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That was pretty gal......very much so.
lenny
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Very nice. You brought me through four moods with so few lines. Well done. "The rains of His mercy cannot gather on the mountaintops of pride, but flow easily into the valleys of humbleness."--Sri Yukteswar
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