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Missed_fantasy
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since 08-16-99
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Mankato, MN, USA


0 posted 08-17-99 02:54 PM       View Profile for Missed_fantasy   Email Missed_fantasy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Missed_fantasy

You Left Again

You left again
it barely registered
that you were here
before you left again
That flash of lightning
blink and you miss
the kind where you
take the elevator
instead of the stairs
and your future
forever changer
for better or for worse
is never to be known

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Love always and blessed be my children
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jfreak
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since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


1 posted 08-17-99 08:05 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

You have written a totally beautiful poem but also a sad one. Nothing more sad than when a love one leaves never reaching their full potential. Keep up the good work.

Jfreak
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2 posted 08-17-99 08:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

SO true. You can never know what would have happened because it didn't happen....but it could have. Very good writing.

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