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Alone is where the pain is at

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The Jackal
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0 posted 08-17-99 02:26 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

use me take me,
bend me, break me,
dont apologize,
just realize,
sweep me under the rug,
wipe up my blood,
play your innocence,
till the final act,
cancer to the face,
of everything disgraced,
my ends have seen the gory,
of a thousand worlds collapse,
now bring me hell,
and dont come back,
alone is where my pain is at



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Poet deVine
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1 posted 08-17-99 08:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I liked this one, but when I read it, I seemed to read it fast..there was a tempo that seemed off...perhaps reformatting would slow it down? I don't know...but I liked it.
pen of passion
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I like the rap.
 
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