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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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0 posted 1999-08-17 01:38 PM


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If it's raining where you are -
and your skies are stormy gray...

Why not rip off all your clothes -
and make the most of a dreary day ?

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet



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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 1999-08-17 01:41 PM


I should have titled this "Run Naked through your sadness..." Meaning just that....when everything seems hopeless and like you're in an endless storm in life, why not run naked through it, and find a bit of cheer in the storm!?

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Severn
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2 posted 1999-08-17 09:49 PM


You know, I love your unique way of looking at the world! Unfortunately, it's winter here and my house is REALLY cold, so nakedness is only pleasant in the shower (grin!) I do agree with your concept, though!
pen of passion
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3 posted 1999-08-17 09:52 PM


Hey, why don't you. Short and sweet.
Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-08-17 10:05 PM


It was raining where I was
So I ripped my clothes right off
I've been stuck in bed for 3 long days
With fever, chills and cough!!

Thanks a bunch!

jfreak
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Yuma, AZ, USA
5 posted 1999-08-18 05:50 PM


LOL at Balladeer.

Jfreak

Delores Hall
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6 posted 1999-08-18 09:34 PM


That's cute.
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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7 posted 1999-08-19 12:29 PM


Gawd Girl!!! You never cease to amaze me! Just when I needed to read something like this too. Thanks so much for posting this!

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*

Alwye
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8 posted 1999-08-19 01:34 AM


Wonderful outlook on life, PFF. One I try to live by...(not exactly literally, I don't have the guts to do that..maybe someday.. ). Thank you for sharing this exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood


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