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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-08-17 12:47 PM


Guile in a Vile

While wondering through a field of words
I picked thee a bouquet.
I was guided by a flock of birds.
In mornings light display.

It's there I plucked some fertile turn
Just a sprite of humor.
A thistle of delicate fern
Green for early bloomer.

I added too some blue of dawn
And just a little pink
I wrapped it in the mist of morn
And set inside a wink.

I grant it is a wild bouquet
It was meant to bring a smile
I hope you take it as repay
And will store it for awhile.

Place it in the sun not cold and
Press it in a book when old.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-08-17 01:14 PM


Thank you, Seymour... your bouquet is lovely!
Nan
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2 posted 1999-08-17 01:57 PM


It's a vision to behold.....
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 1999-08-17 02:14 PM


I didn't know you had it in you to write such a beautifully romantic piece ! LOL What a creative way to express love....Wowee...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-08-17 02:45 PM


To all,
Your humor out shines
My brightest lines.

elvira
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5 posted 1999-08-17 04:51 PM


a lovely, romantic poem Seymour
JP
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since 1999-05-25
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Loomis, CA
6 posted 1999-08-17 06:11 PM


Simply magnificent!

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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 1999-08-17 06:35 PM


To Elvira and JP,
You do me honor but since you did you can't take it back. Thanks again.

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