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My Statuette

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Tim
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0 posted 08-17-99 12:06 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

In stillness of the morning calm,
She rose forth from her slumber,
Her visage was a soothing balm,
My soul did unencumber.
I gazed upon as bloom arose,
As crossed unto to the window,
Flourescence of a summer rose,
Enframed in morning's glow.
She stood as picture in a frame,
Angelic silhouette,
From forth the heavens she had came,
My beauteous statuette.
As flowing stream, her silken hair,
Cascaded cross her face,
As a diamond solitaire,
Was stricken by her grace.
She gazed out on the world below,
This goddess from above,
Within my heart I then did know,
She was my world, my love.

[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-17-99).]
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Nan
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1 posted 08-17-99 01:22 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice work, Tim - Lucky Lady you have there...
elvira
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2 posted 08-17-99 04:40 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

oh-la-la as the french would say...lovely poem Tim...just don't put your statuette on a pedestal but keep her close to you
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3 posted 08-17-99 04:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The thought is good. I'd love to see this one in the critical analysis forum.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 08-17-99 08:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! It must be great to be married to a poet like you - your wife gets all these beautiful tributes to her! Tell her we think she's a lucky lady too!
pen of passion
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5 posted 08-17-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Now that's romantic.
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