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My Statuette |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
In stillness of the morning calm, She rose forth from her slumber, Her visage was a soothing balm, My soul did unencumber. I gazed upon as bloom arose, As crossed unto to the window, Flourescence of a summer rose, Enframed in morning's glow. She stood as picture in a frame, Angelic silhouette, From forth the heavens she had came, My beauteous statuette. As flowing stream, her silken hair, Cascaded cross her face, As a diamond solitaire, Was stricken by her grace. She gazed out on the world below, This goddess from above, Within my heart I then did know, She was my world, my love. [This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-17-99).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice work, Tim - Lucky Lady you have there...  |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
oh-la-la as the french would say...lovely poem Tim...just don't put your statuette on a pedestal but keep her close to you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The thought is good. I'd love to see this one in the critical analysis forum. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! It must be great to be married to a poet like you - your wife gets all these beautiful tributes to her! Tell her we think she's a lucky lady too!  |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Now that's romantic. |
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