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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


0 posted 08-17-99 08:23 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

When she gets out of the bath,
And uses her powder puff,
The soft scent of the dusting
Is never quite enough
To slake the thirst that rises
Through my hungry soul
As I think of us together,
When the two of us are whole.

The towel slides along her thigh,
As she polishes each sweet curve
With an innocence that sinks into
My every cell and nerve.
Her breasts sway in time to
Every movement to and fro
As she bends to her task,
Then wraps her towel to go.

I wonder if you women know
When you take your bath
We men really are quite helpless,
When you do the simplest tasks.
There are so many moments,
When we need to hold you tight,
But sometimes you are so beautiful
We stand muted in your sight.
© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Lorelei54
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1 posted 08-17-99 08:25 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

written by LJA last summer...and posted by me today, his wife...I wanted to show his serious side while Toe was showing his..LOL

One of my favorites!
Toerag
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Ala bam a


2 posted 08-17-99 08:30 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

But....but..Lorelei?....What does it do to you when LongJohn takes a bath?...You know?.....That once a week Saturday nite thing? LOL....When he slowly slides that towel down his one good leg....puts his peg leg back on ever so slowly and gently...then, takes his dentures out of the glass and re-installs them....maticulously replaces that patch over his eye....????????
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 08-17-99 08:35 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is a beautiful poem.......
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


4 posted 08-17-99 08:39 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Dreamie One

Thanks for your well-timed compliment - Toerag is just jealous...
Lorelei54
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5 posted 08-17-99 08:40 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Toe..grrrrr....when LJA takes a bath, its my pleasure to join him...and his "peg" leg does not bother me at all...LOL...you two guys think alike..never serious! and making me late for work cause I want to play!
Toerag
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6 posted 08-17-99 08:52 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do so again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do so again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do it again. I'm truly sorry for making fun of LongJohn's poem and promise never to do it again..........(today)
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on the threshold of a dream


7 posted 08-17-99 09:17 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Toerag: Thank goodness you put that (today) on the end of your promise!!! LOL. I think LJA would miss your teasing as much as I'd miss the show! *G*

LJA: I loved this poem when I first read it... love it still! Great job!
LngJhnAg
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8 posted 08-17-99 11:27 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Belle

I've said it before, I'll say it again. God made this world to be a picture frame for his most beautiful creation - Woman. It never ceases to amaze me how wonderful women are - just looking at a woman gives me serenity and joy. All of you wonderful women out there.... thank you for being feminine.
Nan
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9 posted 08-17-99 01:00 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Good stuff, LJA....
Balladeer
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10 posted 08-17-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Great poem, Long John. Great sentiment and a fantastic closing thought. Talent to spare......
pen of passion
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11 posted 08-17-99 10:18 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I melted.
Carolina Girl
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12 posted 08-17-99 10:19 PM       View Profile for Carolina Girl   Email Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Carolina Girl

LJA....You go boyfriend!!! Lorelei, what else does he have hiding from us? I've never seen the serious side of him...Course, I haven't seen his funny side, either! ROFLMAO!!!
redwriter1
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13 posted 08-17-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Wow!.. Lots of bathtub stories going around lately.. (hehe ) I like it!

I need to try one.!

Thank for a lovely poem.
Delores Hall
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14 posted 08-18-99 12:21 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Well now that explains it all.
passing shadows
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displaced


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yeah, we know
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16 posted 02-20-2011 02:47 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This is beautiful.

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