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Ixtab
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MEXICAlpan de las tunas


0 posted 08-17-99 03:10 AM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ixtab

Once sholess I walked my path
untouched by growing pain
spines and edging bits of glass
touching limits in my soles

Once I feared not what my heart spoke
lending ears to my own hidden lore
Destiny was a tamed and noble beast
which I rode with pride and joy

How blind is clarity?
What lies I fed upon my yarn?
what evil did I spawn?
It wasn´t me the master
I was but a slave

Intoxicated slave,
I tried to reach the light
but in your eyes
I thought i saw myself
I forgot how to live when you left

now my feet are bleeding

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Hurricane Alley


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Welcome! Your poem is very good, full of great imagery.
 
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