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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Once sholess I walked my path untouched by growing pain spines and edging bits of glass touching limits in my soles Once I feared not what my heart spoke lending ears to my own hidden lore Destiny was a tamed and noble beast which I rode with pride and joy How blind is clarity? What lies I fed upon my yarn? what evil did I spawn? It wasn´t me the master I was but a slave Intoxicated slave, I tried to reach the light but in your eyes I thought i saw myself I forgot how to live when you left now my feet are bleeding |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! Your poem is very good, full of great imagery.  |
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