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My wilderness |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA 
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Parched by the winds of time My tounge and throat long to taste A refreshing drop of truth's moisture that soothes my secondary life I was hatched from situations unknown Yet seen to be a treasure non the less Cast astray to the dunes of eternity By which my character has grown Into manhood so uncertain That I wander in this wilderness Searching for something to soothe my thirst And wash away my doubt hovering as a curtain Suspending the light of day from bringing me hope Casting a form of Darkness over my being which scorches my flesh at bay Then upon the embers I cast my gaze where truth is nailed and all can see My freedom bound and bleeding there Giving me a river of life for all my days |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! This is a great example of your search for faith. I like these lines the best: "where truth is nailed and all can see My freedom bound and bleeding there Giving me a river of life for all my days" Good one jfreak! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I enjoyed your poem. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Good job jfreak. Nice to see your name here at PIP. ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Thank you so much all of you, Especially you devine. Your words are an encouragement. Especially since this is my first poem after in a about six weeks of "famine". Thank you again. JFreak |
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