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moonmoon
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0 posted 08-17-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for moonmoon

Don't know how I could come up with the courage to post something so lame..Well, I was in a good mood today & thought I'd concoct something silly...!!! Pl comment (looks like I need the admonition to get more serious..)


My Online Friend…

I met this cool, witty guy on line
For lack of a better adjective,I call him 'divine'

No, not a saint, just a normal guy
Who, in real life, could be very shy…

Still a stranger -A friend? No, not yet
But I swear he is someone so full of zest…

We met on a board..not through some clan
But I don’t believe it was some 'master plan'

Its late, I am blue & I click on my mouse
Behold, he is there, mad at his spouse..!

We rant, we rave, take crap off our chests
When we feel better, aah, time for some rest

We chat, we yap, we laugh, we troop
We don’t say goodbyes when heads start to droop

He's classy, he's zesty, he's level-headed too
I think, from him, I could learn a thing or two..

I won't be surprised if he disappears 'morrow
And I don’t think it will fill me with sorrow

I think --I'd keep him, for good or for now;
If he's gone 'morrow-I'd smile & take a bow…!!

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within." Amelia E. Barr



[This message has been edited by moonmoon (edited 08-18-99).]
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Terri
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1 posted 08-17-99 01:30 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Lame? I don't find that so. I think it epitomizes most of the friendships we make out here in cyberspace. Free of the judgments and restraints we place on ourselves regarding physical appearances, we can let our true light shine. (This is just a long winded way of saying -- I liked it!)
Sue
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2 posted 08-17-99 02:02 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Lame isn't the word I would have used, either. I liked it.
elvira
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3 posted 08-17-99 02:19 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i enjoy a light verse tremendously...thanks for posting it moon
moonmoon
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4 posted 08-18-99 12:50 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


Thank you Terri & Sue...



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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


moonmoon
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5 posted 08-18-99 12:53 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


Thank you Elvira, In fact, the many light verses you have posted on Passions were an encouragement for me to write this one...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Poet deVine
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6 posted 08-19-99 01:49 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

The internet can bring us closer together and yet keep us apart. I liked this...not bad. Welcome!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 08-19-99 10:26 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Moonmoon,
Don't give up to soon, enjoyed the read.
moonmoon
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8 posted 08-20-99 03:04 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon



Thank you Sharon & Seymour...
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